Tonight’s Haiku : As The Daylight Dims

Posted on July 25, 2021 by Carl Setzer

The Edmonds Waterfront

as the daylight dims

water pushing against sand

air becoming cool

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2 thoughts on “Tonight’s Haiku : As The Daylight Dims”

Davy July 28, 20217:09 pm

I like how this is a multisensory haiku (seeing the sun, hearing the waves, feeling the air). Excellent.

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1. Carl Setzer July 28, 20217:54 pm
  
  Thanks, Davy! I deeply appreciate your thoughts.
  
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